My day and my week

Hello my name is Gerard  i usually get up at 7:30 I have breakfast at 8 o'clock I go to school at 8:25. Start school at 9 o'clock I have lunch at 2 o'clock finish school i retort to school at 3 o'clock and i finish school at 5 o'clock. On Saturday I play football another team and i Sunday a chatting the internet with my friends and do my homework

Thanks for you atention


Self evaluation of my oral presentation

1. presentation.

I speak at 38 seconds
2. body language.
I don't move
sometimes I read
3 structure.
I did very well structure
4. content. 
The content was not very specific
5. language.
My vocabulary is a bit poor
6. Phonetics.
I gave regular pronounce.
7 My final mark is : 5,65

What have you done well? Information the my day.
What do you need for improvise? 
I got nervous and I was a little white